We’ve spent the past few days polishing the script… folded in much (but not all) of the feedback we got, fixed the typos, found some new words that sounded more better. Still very pleased with the first draft, the structure…
We’ve spent the past few days polishing the script… folded in much (but not all) of the feedback we got, fixed the typos, found some new words that sounded more better. Still very pleased with the first draft, the structure…
And… scene! Spent a few hours today tightening up some loose ends on the first draft. Gave the dog some more face time. Figured out how we could keep the spray can of bear piss, have it still be relevant,…
UPDATE: After my FIRST Zhura posting, I told you that I’d tried creating a new doc from a TEXT file to purge the technology demons from my script. So far less than perfect. I’ve still got niggling problems like whole…
Another day online through Zhura. Got a kinda late start… Sean’s Aunt needed a cast. Long story. Ends with a broken fibula. Another time. Pounded through 5 pages… saved our heroes from the mountain lion, took them up the mountain…
[follow up to this follow up here] As you know, we’re using Zhura.com‘s online screenwriting collaboration tools to write our latest (untitled) feature project. And as you know, it’s proven less than perfect. What came out of the research around…