New horror project: the polish

We’ve spent the past few days polishing the script… folded in much (but not all) of the feedback we got, fixed the typos, found some new words that sounded more better. Still very pleased with the first draft, the structure overall. The polishing is putting that final sheen on it, but it really isn’t getting […]

New horror project: day twenty-one writing

And… scene! Spent a few hours today tightening up some loose ends on the first draft. Gave the dog some more face time. Figured out how we could keep the spray can of bear piss, have it still be relevant, then when to get rid of it. Wrote a new stanza for the Victorian poetry […]

Zhura – still troubling after all these scenes.

UPDATE: After my FIRST Zhura posting, I told you that I’d tried creating a new doc from a TEXT file to purge the technology demons from my script. So far less than perfect. I’ve still got niggling problems like whole portions of the script (a dozen pages or more) suddenly and inexplicably becoming BOLD, or […]

New horror project: day eighteen writing

Another day online through Zhura. Got a kinda late start… Sean’s Aunt needed a cast. Long story. Ends with a broken fibula. Another time. Pounded through 5 pages… saved our heroes from the mountain lion, took them up the mountain trail, and trapped them as the beasties advance. Gave them a harrowing adventure crossing a […]

Zhura.com update

[follow up to this follow up here] As you know, we’re using Zhura.com‘s online screenwriting collaboration tools to write our latest (untitled) feature project. And as you know, it’s proven less than perfect. What came out of the research around “why is this thing so buggy” is that we had cut and pasted our original […]