Are you a writer with a screenplay, looking for some honest, informed feedback?
What you get
Just $129 gets you a complete read-through, notes on your PDF, and a 1-2 page high-level report of the script. I’ll include feedback on general formatting, story structure, and character development. I do NOT offer “marketability” estimates.
Just $179 gets you all of the above, plus a new logline and a one-page synopsis.
Be forewarned … I’ve got a reputation for being brutally honest. If I feel like you wasted four hours of my life, I’ll say so.
Chip is a damn good script reader because he’s a damn good script writer. He takes his kid gloves off and delivers honest, on point and actionable notes. My scripts would not in the shape they are without his professional input and insightful feedback. Because of Chip’s professional script feedback, my entire approach to writing now goes to 11, not just my screenplay. Thanks Chip!
- Jeff Palmer, Award Winning Screenwriter, The Sleeping DeepI just read your comments. Great job, Chip! [It] definitely gives the kid motive, and helps me in directing the scene.
- Ram Hernandez, Writer/Director, Phoenix FallingI really appreciate your feedback about issues in the story! I also appreciate these funny suggestions! They’re great! I’m going to add all of these. Thanks for helping me fix it up!
- Erikka Innes, Writer/Director/Comedian – More Testimonials
Why me?
I’m an IMDB credited screenwriter who has sold and optioned screenplays, is a competition finalist, screenplay judge for a major industry competition, film pre-screener for an International Film Festival, and founder of Write Club Screenplay Challenge.
My blogs on screenwriting, contract negotiation, and crowdfunding have been featured or mentioned by the BlueCat Competition Newsletter and Script Magazine, and called “must read” by IndieWire.com. See the PRESS PAGE for more.
My point of view is that of an experienced reader: that person who judges the contests, who filters submissions, who stands between you and the people who make decisions, award prizes, and write checks. If you want that guy’s opinion, I’m your huckleberry.
I’m able to see what’s right, what’s wrong, and communicate it with clear, actionable feedback. Plus, I’m frikkin’ anal about spelling and punctuation, so I’ll probably rant a little about that too.
Bonus: What are screenplay readers looking for?
What Screenplay Readers Really Want: The Interview
