Screenplay Analyst

I will shred your screenplay. Brutal, honest feedback and actionable direction.


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Latest Articles

Some of my more recent ramblings. Maybe you'll like them.

More On Writing Screenplay Description

[Yes, I see the pun in the title] Over on my post What Bad Science Fiction Can Teach Us About Writing Screenplay Description, Susanna  asked a great question: What about an animated movie script? I read somewhere that they should be more descriptive than the other ones, is that true? I don’t know to what extent […]

26 Nov, 2013 Chip Street

Casting the perfect stars for Grampa Was A Superhero

The producer who’s got Faeries under option right now recently asked us to put together a dream cast … if we could have anyone we wanted, who would we put in our movie? Of course we came up with a hot list of A caliber talent. Hopefully they’re all getting phone calls as we speak. […]

12 Jul, 2013 Chip Street